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Grade 4

Revising for clarity and order

Improve a short paragraph by checking sentence order, repeated ideas, and missing details.

Category: Grammar in Use 10 min Confident
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Revision is more than fixing spelling. It also means making sure the ideas come in a sensible order and the meaning stays clear for the reader.

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Start with the sentence that introduces the topic before giving small details.

organization rule

Readers need the main idea early.

Example: Good order makes writing easier to follow.

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Remove repeated details if they say the same thing again.

revision move

Repetition can make a paragraph weaker.

Example: Clear writing avoids unnecessary repetition.

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Add a missing detail when the reader needs one more fact to understand the idea.

clarity move

Revision sometimes means adding, not just cutting.

Example: Useful details improve clarity.

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Final check: Read the paragraph once as if you are the reader.

editing habit

This helps you notice confusing jumps or missing steps.

Example: Reading like a reader supports revision.

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