Improve a short paragraph by checking sentence order, repeated ideas, and missing details.
Revision is more than fixing spelling. It also means making sure the ideas come in a sensible order and the meaning stays clear for the reader.
Open one card at a time, read the text together, and use the audio button when hearing the line once helps.
organization rule
Readers need the main idea early.
Example: Good order makes writing easier to follow.
revision move
Repetition can make a paragraph weaker.
Example: Clear writing avoids unnecessary repetition.
clarity move
Revision sometimes means adding, not just cutting.
Example: Useful details improve clarity.
editing habit
This helps you notice confusing jumps or missing steps.
Example: Reading like a reader supports revision.
These next steps stay in the same stage so the child does not get sent backward.
Read and write short dialogue using quotation marks, commas, and speaker tags correctly.
Build a paragraph that starts clearly and adds details that stay on the same topic.
Notice how past, present, and future verbs change depending on when the action happens.
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